Saturday, 4 January 2014

Haiku #3 ~ Clap

“Dancing leaves clap in unity,
All in vain,
Down by winter’s blade!”


This post is a part of Ultimate Blogging Challenge ~ Day 5!
For Haiku Heights #316 - Clap 


30 comments:

  1. A perfect haiku... 17... good ..I liked the thought very much.....and perhaps my first visit to your page..is it so? Hope you will reciprocate..the visit..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/01/clap-clap-clap-clap-clap-haiku.html

    RS:)

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  2. Aayesha, do visit again to see the "real" haiku I have created...for the post.. yes, did some editing after your visit..

    RS

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  3. It's better to have... clapped... and lost, than never to have clapped... Nice haiku!

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  4. Gr8 ... Work .. Now i understand haiku ..

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  5. nicely written haiku.you also have a nice blog.

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  6. The imagery attached it perfect! I could picture it..

    Richa

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    1. absolutely Richa :)
      found it apt for my words!

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  7. How poignant! I could picture it..your words were so vivid! ♥

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  8. The dancing leaves's claps will never go in vain. beautiful haiku.

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  9. lovely haiku and perfect picture :)

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  10. Your words have woven a beautiful imagery.

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  11. "Winter's blade'...great phrase♪ Am getting felled by it here in Chicagoland! Still, Happy2014! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/taking-flight/

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  12. Oh... so lovely...
    Blends with the mood of the current season..

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