Tuesday, 7 January 2014

Haiku #4 ~ A Loud 'CLAP' Of Thunder!

"A loud clap of thunder,
Forced me to open my eyes, I realized..
I was alone with my memories!"


This post is a part of Ultimate Blogging Challenge ~ Day 8!

26 comments:

  1. loneliness glorified beautifully

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  2. Before the thunder comes the lightning. Your memories must have come in a flash :)

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  3. There's something about rain that makes us nostalgic and mind wanders down the memory lane...Nicely worded Aayesha:)

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    1. truly Reshma, rains always make me nostalgic and make my mind wander!

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  4. Yes memories tend to put us in a state of trance, often taking us to places we wish to be and sudden realities wakes us up..

    Richa

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    1. yes, to places we wish to be, but we shouldn't be in, sometimes! :P

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  5. Profound and deep ... loved the portrayal :-)

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    1. thank you Amrit, glad you liked it :)

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  6. Really nice..u gettin real good at this :) !!

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  7. Memories can be so real.

    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/01/10/sound-of-creation/

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