Friday, 17 January 2014

Little Did She Know ~ 55 Words

‘I believe anyone who is unbelievably good is unreal. Good guys are real guys, with all their follies, who forget to wish you on special days, but are always there to pick up the broken pieces when you most need them, like you Sahil.’ Alia said. 

Little did she know, her best friend loved her to madness!


Also, day 17 at Ultimate Blogging Challenge.

24 comments:

  1. I agree! and a wonderful one :)

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  2. Love is very strange. One person chases it and is not able to experience and the other is unaware of some-one loving .

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    1. so well said Kalpana!
      sad, but true! :)

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  3. Brilliant one, Aayesha. Sometimes, we don't value the ones who love us dearly and we lament once they are gone. Superb lines and love the way u started the story:)

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  4. Aayesha, you have penned a very emotional 55er.

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  5. we keep running after the people who least care about us. Why don't we just stop, turn around and see those who are running behind us? - I am doing that now - that's my resolution this year and your prompt says it all :)

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    1. Oh, nice resolution, Karan!
      That's right! We never turn and look back! :(

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  6. That's so true, there are no perfect men (except maybe Bradley Cooper :) ) but what makes a perfect man are those imperfect habits which irritate you but you still miss them when they are not around :)

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    1. Prasanna :P
      Yes, those imperfect, irritating habits that don't let you hate him ;)

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  7. Wow...so true...the exceptionally good guys have to be unreal...it's d gal who sees the ordinary as the 'extra-ordinary' (probably tujhme rab dikhta hai types!) n d romance grows....:)

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    1. true! ;)
      hehe, that's a lovely song, Amrita :)

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  8. Oh! Hope she realizes it soon! Good 55er!

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  9. Poor Sahil. You can probably do a couple of follow up 55ers and develop it into a story. Would love to see where this goes! Well written :)

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    1. Will surely give it a thought! :)
      thank you :)

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